Task: Write a letter to an investor about a new invention you have created.
I read about your successful previous projects when you set up venture companies for providing innovative ideas. THIS is ONE reason why I’m writing you.
I’d like to SUGGEST you organize the company for producing wireless headsets.
I THINK that this gadget could be demanded by THE market. And we can make specific devices for sportsmen. Note how many people now use WIRED headsets and how uncomfortable they feel, especially when they are EXERCISING.
We have technology now and all we need: to create A very attractive design. Creating a cool image is very important. After some investment in advertising we can start our sales.
Please, let me know if this offer is interestING for you.
PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU ARE INTERESTED IN THIS OFFER)
The capital letters show our mistakes which was corrected by teacher Audrey Ross