Task:
Write a paragraph describing an e-commerce site you have used or heard about. Comment on the site's functionality and product range. How does it compare to similar sites?
Travel cheap with momondo.com Once I had a conversation with my collegue who is passionate about the idea of traveling for a small amount of money. He recommended that I buy tickets for flights on momondo.com.
This site has a friendly interface, and is very simple in use. All the customers need is to point out the direction and date for the flight.
The design is simple, without animations or graphics. It doesn’t look as cool as a similar service from Google ( google.com/flights/ ), where the tracks are visualized and we can see the way of planning trips on the map.
Dark colors which momondo.com uses less attractive then white background from Google (at least for me).
The service from momondo.com has a special application for mobile devices.
All things which I mentioned above are not so important. Customers are looking for cheap tickets and this site is definitely right place for it.
Teacher’s comment:
I recommend that you review where to place articles in your sentences. For example you wrote, "small amount of money" instead of, "a small amount of money." Reviewing article placement will help to strengthen your writing. I recommend that you review where to place verbs and conjunctions in your sentences. For example you wrote, "very simple" instead of, "and is very simple." Reviewing sentence structure will help to strengthen your writing.
This topic was written and corrected by teacher Julia D in online school http://englishlive.ef.com (former englishtown)
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